Concept word: Helpless Looks like: An emotionless baby who is usually always smiling and laughing. Sounds like: Silence while everyone is speechless, finally seeing what they are doing to the baby. Smells like: a different laundry detergent from the previous household. Tastes like: Slime. Feels like: my heart dropping and difficulty breathing. Reminds me of: …
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Essay 2: Draft 1
Kesiah Olvera Janel Spencer Writing 101S 17 October 2019 A Blessing In Disguise My entire 18 years, I have been around foster kids; younger ones, older ones, and all with their own story to tell. On both my mom and dad’s side of the family numerous foster kids come in and out and very few …
In Class 10/16
My mother, Nancy She is about 5’4, blonde/highlighted hair with bangs, brown eyes, freckles, dresses casually with tennis shoes, T-shirt and jeans When my mom broke the news to me that she wont be able to adopt the baby. She came into my room and looked at me, sat on my bed with me, started …
In Class 10/15
Who: Aracely Sophia and family What: Foster system When: 2017-2019 Where: uncles home, to biologicl mothers home to her adopted families home Why: biologic mother wasn’t able to care for her child; even when she knew it, the foster system didn’t seem to care I remember the first time Aracely was in the hospital and …
Outline Essay 2
Introduction: Family takes care of foster children my whole life Sad cases I have seen throughout, what improvements foster system can use Introduce Araceli Ley l (Exposition): More in depth about Araceli: Born premature, with a 16 year old mom, head injury, 27 days in the incubator then into my aunt and uncles care. Biological …
Class writing 10/8
I have come to believe… The foster care system can use many improvements I am standing here … Continuing to learn more and more about its flaws Less than a year ago… I was clueless about what our foster kids go through on a day to day basis.
Class writing 10/9
Had you written a rhetorical analysis before? What aspects of a rhetorical analysis did you learn about that you hadn’t considered before? No, I learned there are more startegie than just ethos, logos, pathos What did you learn about your piece or your author’s perspective that you otherwise wouldn’t have discovered? I learned how many …
Grammer Guide
Sentence fragment: an incomplete sentence because it lacks a subject, lacks a verb, or is a dependent clause. Subordinate Conjunctions: after, although, as, as if, as though, because, before, except, if, since, though, unless, until, when, whereas Relative Pronouns: that, what, whatever, which, who, whoever, whom, whose EXAMPLE Fragments Although he wanted to go to …
Essay 1 Final
Kesiah Olvera Janel Spencer WRT 101S 3 October 2019 Rhetorical Analysis: Make College Free For All Vermont senator and presidential candidate, Bernie Sanders, writes an article posted on The Washington Post, which argues why college should be free. In his article, “Make College Free For All” (October 22, 2015), Sanders argues that higher education should …
Conclusion
Bernie Sanders uses his personal experiences, America’s history, and a comparison of the U.S. to other countries to make his argument persuasive. He successfully targeted his audience by acknowledging their values. Doing so, then caught their attention and interest as to why this topic should be relevant to them. Sanders focused on the benefits free …
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